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    Hi,

    I have a 280 word German essay which is gonna be part of my GCSE grade, so could anyone be so kind as to read it over for errors?

    If you're willing, could you PM me or post here and I'll send it to you in a PM to avoid plagiarism

    Thanks a lot
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    You can send it to me
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    (Original post by Sappho)
    You can send it to me
    thanks a lot PM'ed
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    if you pm i'll look over it for you too if you want
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    (Original post by Sappho)
    You can send it to me
    Nordrhein-Westfalen! My family come from there :love:
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    (Original post by hannahsl)
    if you pm i'll look over it for you too if you want
    thanks for the offer but I think Sappho's taking care of it

    I may need some further assistance with some sample answers which I'm preparing for a structured conversation which is also part of the exam, if you wouldn't mind helping me out there?

    thanks
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    (Original post by Refrigerator)
    thanks for the offer but I think Sappho's taking care of it

    I may need some further assistance with some sample answers which I'm preparing for a structured conversation which is also part of the exam, if you wouldn't mind helping me out there?

    thanks
    yeah just pm them to me whenever if you want them checking over
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    (Original post by hannahsl)
    yeah just pm them to me whenever if you want them checking over
    great, thanks

    I haven't got round to writing them yet but I'll do that tomorrow and send them over

    thanks again
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    (Original post by Refrigerator)
    great, thanks

    I haven't got round to writing them yet but I'll do that tomorrow and send them over

    thanks again
    no probs, wish i was doing gcse german again! haha
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    (Original post by kerily)
    Nordrhein-Westfalen! My family come from there :love:
    Oh cool Did you use to live there as well? Which city? As long as it's not Düsseldorf
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    You can pm me and I totally won't copy it
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    (Original post by Potiron)
    You can pm me and I totally won't copy it
    Sorry to bump in, but isn't it "per ardua ad astra"?
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    (Original post by Sappho)
    Sorry to bump in, but isn't it "per ardua ad astra"?
    Wikipedia and Pall Mall cigarettes would disagree.

    But you're the classics scholar so I'm inclined to believe you.
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    (Original post by Potiron)
    Wikipedia and Pall Mall cigarettes would disagree.

    But you're the classics scholar so I'm inclined to believe you.
    Well, Wikipedia rules

    But I definitely prefer Seneca's „Non est ad astra mollis e terris via“.

    I really wonder how I thought that "per ardua ad astra" is some original quotation...
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    (Original post by Sappho)
    Well, Wikipedia rules

    But I definitely prefer Seneca's „Non est ad astra mollis e terris via“.

    I really wonder how I thought that "per ardua ad astra" is some original quotation...
    I think I prefer "ad astra per alas porci."



    We're heading dangerously off-topic here. Did you help the dude with his German?
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    (Original post by Potiron)
    I think I prefer "ad astra per alas porci."



    We're heading dangerously off-topic here. Did you help the dude with his German?
    Ey, of course I did

    Pigasus is quite cute indeed My bike is called Pegasus, but if I ever have a pink bike, this'd be a nice name, too
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    (Original post by Sappho)
    Ey, of course I did

    Pigasus is quite cute indeed My bike is called Pegasus, but if I ever have a pink bike, this'd be a nice name, too
    Pegasus is an excellent name for a bike.
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    (Original post by Potiron)
    Pegasus is an excellent name for a bike.
    Isn't it?

    I will miss it when I come to the UK to study there! The other day I realised I'd get €130 for the Latin lessons I do, I guess I'll spend them on a second bike for Scotland! Any suggestions for a nice name for it?
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    (Original post by Sappho)
    Isn't it?

    I will miss it when I come to the UK to study there! The other day I realised I'd get €130 for the Latin lessons I do, I guess I'll spend them on a second bike for Scotland! Any suggestions for a nice name for it?
    Artax, Xanthos, Binky, or Bieber :love:
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    (Original post by Potiron)
    Artax, Xanthos, Binkie, or Bieber :love:
    Bieber as in Justin Bieber?:eek:

    No offense there, Justin Bieber (together with our eldest and dustiest Latin teacher) was very handy to explain Greek male love attitudes to my Latin tutorial pupils...
 
 
 
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