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Someone mark this for me please? [English Lit] - Can you tell me what grade it is? watch
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Last edited by ju1c; 16-04-2011 at 14:07.
- 02-04-2011 22:27
- 02-04-2011 22:55
B is still a grade
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- 02-04-2011 23:02
Could you re-phrase that lol
and thanks for reading
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- 03-04-2011 12:33
I think he's trying to say it's about a B, I'd be inclined to say it's a low B or high C
It starts off well but then your paragraph length drops considerably, this is fine when done right in an article type piece, but not in an analysis essay.
You're also seriously lacking when it comes to quotes and it's rather short, only about a page of A4, while the length would be a high B or low A in an exam (providing it was a good essay other than the length), it's a bit lacking when it comes to coursework with which you should be aiming at 2 pages at least, most of my class did at least 3 with most doing 4.
- 04-04-2011 20:19
I am putting on my 'snarky teacher' hat for this, so forgive me if I'm a bit rude.
(Original post by ju1c)
Educating Rita is a play which was written by Willy Russell in the late seventies. There are two main characters in the whole play. Frank her tutor, and Rita the student. This play is about Rita, a married woman, trying to achieve a better life for her. Going to an Open University has turned her life around. She is willing to lose everything for an enhanced standard of living.
Act 1 scene 1 is the introductory stage to Russell's characters.
we get to know Frank quite well
We learn that Frank is a university lecturer who appears to have grown tired of his job and the same old people.
Russell uses a lot of dramatic devices.
To begin with, Russell does not tell straight away the reason why Frank, the university lecturer, is “hurriedly” replacing each book on the bookshelf; instead, he creates an element of suspense, keeping interest in the audience’s eyes.
We see Frank searching the rows and rows of literature in his office for an author beginning with "E"; he then seems to decide he wants Dickens. Once he finds his collection of Dickens, he pulls them out, to reveal a bottle of Whiskey.
They have a conversation that increases in venom
Whoever is on the other side of the door is having trouble making their way inside, and so Frank begins to get irritated with their persistent knocking after he has already said, "Come in.." a few times.
Russell uses the door metaphorically to explain how hard and painful it is for Rita to get an education now, and also, all the decisions she is going to take, such as leaving Denny.
After this, it gets better, and the essay leaves the earlier narration for analysis that is often solid.
Rita has a ‘working-class’ accent and speaks informal
This makes the opening very dramatic as we see such a big gap in education and social class level that the audience can pick up on it and make sense of the humour in it.
Introducing of the characters Rita and Frank to the audience was also effective
and by using in-depth symbolism to make this such an effective opening to the play
The extensive insight gained in this first scene, will help the reader tremendously, in understanding further events in the play, and the relationship that develops.
In general, I think you need to adopt a more authoritative tone, and to stop using language that you clearly don't fully understand. Also, I'm not sure what the word limit is on this piece, but it feels a bit brief. Overall I think this is C-grade stuff.
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- 11-04-2011 15:02
NvmLast edited by ju1c; 14-04-2011 at 19:54.