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Can somebody please mark my english essay and give ma a grade and improvements? (I'll PM it to you)

It's on poems from different cultures, cluster 2.

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I can give it my teacher via, VLE and ask him what he thinks of it...
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I would because I have nothing to do, but I can't because I am doing the Conflict cluster
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I did AQA English Lang and AQA English Lit Spec A for my GCSEs and, not showing off obviously , got 2x A*s

If you want me to take a look, feel free to PM me.
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(Original post by king101)
I can give it my teacher via, VLE and ask him what he thinks of it...

(Original post by mevidek)
I would because I have nothing to do, but I can't because I am doing the Conflict cluster

(Original post by lace-rules)
I did AQA English Lang and AQA English Lit Spec A for my GCSEs and, not showing off obviously , got 2x A*s

If you want me to take a look, feel free to PM me.
OK guys I'm going to PM you in about 5 minutes (just need to finish typing it up)
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I don't mind... I'm free now...
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Me too!

I am doing cluster 2 too.
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Me too!

I am doing cluster 2 too.
Erm... how do I write a PM?
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Erm... how do I write a PM?
Click this:

http://www.thestudentroom.co.uk/private.php?do=newpm&
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I wouldn't mind, I can also send it to my teacher who will advice you on improvements if they are needed...
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I wouldn't mind, I can also send it to my teacher who will advice you on improvements if they are needed...
OK I'm sending it to you now.
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OK I'm sending it to you now.
Thanks, I'll foward it to my teacher and see what she thinks.
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Thanks, I'll foward it to my teacher and see what she thinks.
Do you know when I'll be able to get the feedback?
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Do you know when I'll be able to get the feedback?
Wednesday at the latest. From what I've read, it's a good essay however I have 2 issues with it
  • The use of I at the beginning, I was told you should never do that as it is a bit cliche and seems informal in the examiner's eyes.
  • You could also do some more analysis and give some original ideas
  • Finally, evaluate the effect of the techniques employed. This will get you you A*


Hope this helps.

Best of luck

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Wednesday at the latest. From what I've read, it's a good essay however I have 2 issues with it
  • The use of I at the beginning, I was told you should never do that as it is a bit cliche and seems informal in the examiner's eyes.
  • You could also do some more analysis and give some original ideas
  • Finally, evaluate the effect of the techniques employed. This will get you you A*


Hope this helps.

Best of luck

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What do you mean by evaluate?
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What do you mean by evaluate?
Evaluate the effect on the reader: Do you think it was effective in (for example) manipulating and the reader's response? etc
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Evaluate the effect on the reader: Do you think it was effective in (for example) manipulating and the reader's response? etc
Oh Ok. Thanks
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Oh Ok. Thanks
You welcome
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Feel free to PM me, I'll try and get back to you by tomorrow Good luck in your exam(s)
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