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Poetic Memory

In the bland mists of time begotten,
T’was once thine fair lady forgotten,
Lost in the realms of dreams so deep,
Dreams of happiness she couldn’t keep,
When tied in thoughts so hardly retained,
She would lose her mind and be so pained,
Therefore she’d undertaken watchful thinking to pertain,
The knowledge that she sought to try and maintain!

Hither came the tides of charm so sweet,
To mould your mind so perfect a treat,
A Bain be you of the thoughts mislaid,
Like mislaid hundreds of a debt unpaid,
Yet still your thoughts can try and still deny,
A perfect moment on which stability does rely,
Stability of a staple mind so innocent with its charm,
The charm of a thousand good deeds of patient calm!

Any contribution?
bazippit
In the bland mists of time begotten,
T’was once thine fair lady forgotten,
Lost in the realms of dreams so deep,
Dreams of happiness she couldn’t keep,
When tied in thoughts so hardly retained,
She would lose her mind and be so pained,
Therefore she’d undertaken watchful thinking to pertain,
The knowledge that she sought to try and maintain!

Hither came the tides of charm so sweet,
To mould your mind so perfect a treat,
A Bain be you of the thoughts mislaid,
Like mislaid hundreds of a debt unpaid,
Yet still your thoughts can try and still deny,
A perfect moment on which stability does rely,
Stability of a staple mind so innocent with its charm,
The charm of a thousand good deeds of patient calm!

Any contribution?


Is is about making Love for the first time?
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Matt the cat
Is is about making Love for the first time?


I have no idea, supposed to be about the realms of memory
even as an english student i can't figure it out... :confused:
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waiting2smile
even as an english student i can't figure it out... :confused:


Hence why I never took up poetry for a career
bazippit
I have no idea, supposed to be about the realms of memory


Well writing about memory is not really a poetic subject i dont think... that kind of thing should be painted not written.
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Matt the cat
Well writing about memory is not really a poetic subject i dont think... that kind of thing should be painted not written.


Tried art at A-Level, fell on my arse
bazippit
Hence why I never took up poetry for a career


my parents believe that after uni i may lead a life very simmilar to Jean Rhys...quite worrying...
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waiting2smile
my parents believe that after uni i may lead a life very simmilar to Jean Rhys...quite worrying...


Que?
bazippit
Que?


she was a brilliant writer, who struggled a lot, and was an alchoholic in summary...if anyone has read 'wide sargasso sea' the prequel to Jane Eyre they'll know what i'm talking about.
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waiting2smile
she was a brilliant writer, who struggled a lot, and was an alchoholic in summary...if anyone has read 'wide sargasso sea' the prequel to Jane Eyre they'll know what i'm talking about.


Sorry for my stupidity! Sounds interesting though
bazippit
Sorry for my stupidity! Sounds interesting though


No it's okay. I don't think that many people will have heard of her. The recognition of her work came far too late - she was old and dying. She was a literary success around the 60s/70s i think, but her work is still pretty much embraced now.
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Matt the cat
Well writing about memory is not really a poetic subject i dont think... that kind of thing should be painted not written.


Anything is a poetic subject. Open your mind.
corey
Anything is a poetic subject. Open your mind.


i wouldn't say anything...maybe most things...:wink:

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