Inspector calls Eva smiths diary

How can i start this? what sort of words did they use in that time? have you got any good points to include? im writing about when she visited Mrs Birling at the charity. I am really stuck. Please help!!

i don't think words matter.....................just right about how she would have felt and why she lied about her identity

How about: Dear Diary,
today I went to see ......(put in the place)..... I was very nervous about the whole ordeal. I sat down on a chair and waited, i was so scared. Wishing I had someone proper to look after me. I felt like everyone was staring at me, like they knew about my secret. A woman told me she would see me now, she looked very smartand snobbish, she looked the part. I could never look like that. I sat at her desk and poured out my whole story. But when she asked for my name I didnt say my real name -I said it was Mrs Birling, I felt that if I told her she would probably tell all her friends and . She was really angry and then said that was her name. I started to cry and I could she was judging me, telling her self that I was some silly pregnant poor girl. Why does everyone have to judge me? I don't want this baby....really I dont. Anyway she told me shes not going to help me. What am I to do now? I'm stuck, hopeless me. Is life worth living anymore?

yea, thats sounds gud!

thank you very much

Thanks for that but im not going to copy it im just gonna use parts of it, if thats alright with you?