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    come on people it's so blatantly obvious
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    (Original post by waiting2smile)
    sighs...i'm getting tired of this...pretty please...
    same here, and i have to go now
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    (Original post by waiting2smile)
    sighs...i'm getting tired of this...pretty please...
    I am aswell, wake me when it's over. *yawn*
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    (Original post by waiting2smile)
    i know you are amazingtrade even???
    Nope. Higher post count still
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    Daveo?
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    (Original post by Infinity)
    I am aswell, wake me when it's over. *yawn*
    i'll try, i may fall alseep by then.
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    (Original post by Tinykates)
    come on people it's so blatantly obvious
    Well i though so too, but apparently its not.
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    (Original post by Valentine)
    Well i though so too, but apparently its not.
    see above for my guess
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    (Original post by Tinykates)
    Daveo?
    Ha! Apparently it isn't so obvious after all then.
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    (Original post by Valentine)
    Well i though so too, but apparently its not.
    2776 - although i can't quite imagine him being you.
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    (Original post by Valentine)
    Ha! Apparently it isn't so obvious after all then.
    oh erm. Kurdt? or ZJuwelH
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    (Original post by waiting2smile)
    2776 - although i can't quite imagine him being you.
    Nope. Not that high a post count.
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    Wakes back up long enough to say, are you Kurdt? Nah...
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    (Original post by Valentine)
    Well i though so too, but apparently its not.
    Damn idiot attention seekers.
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    (Original post by Tinykates)
    Daveo?
    oh yes, i recall you struggling what to write about in your card
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    (Original post by Tinykates)
    oh erm. Kurdt? or ZJuwelH
    This is starting to get embarrasing.

    No and no.
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    (Original post by Valentine)
    I have written this poem, but am not prepared to share it as myself.
    But, the observent may find enough clues to find out who i am.
    Please, tell me what you think.

    How can i compare the uncomparable
    Who fixed a heart so unrepairable
    Made me believe in a new tomorrow.
    An angel that dispels my sorrow.
    For true description no words exist,
    they pale, and fade. I cant resist
    the spell you cast upon my heart.
    To feel your presence, fear departs,
    Because i ask "so what is fear?"
    The one reply "when your not here",
    But fear is why i cannot say
    To you just that i feel this way.
    My guardian angel, my shining light,
    you give me strength, the will to fight,
    to stand, and not to fear the fall.
    You own my heart, you are my all.
    childish rhyme scheme, completly cliched imagery, pretty boring presents nothing new or a new angle on anything. Structure makes it too slow in my opinion.

    More teenage spur of the moment emotional drivel.
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    *yawn*

    Eric?
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    (Original post by Infinity)
    Wakes back up long enough to say, are you Kurdt? Nah...
    No Kurdts writing's better than that.
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    (Original post by corey)
    childish rhyme scheme, completly cliched imagery, pretty boring presents nothing new or a new angle on anything. Structure makes it too slow in my opinion.

    More emotional drivel.
    hmm - Keatsish i thought, with the rhyming couplets n all....but fair enough if you say 'childish'
 
 
 
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