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I'd put the first sentence at the end of the paragraph. Try not to say the full title of the book too much, its a bit wordy, and you've used 'manipulate' twice and repeated your point. Just try to make it flow a bit better.
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Is this GCSE or A level? First sentence starts off well, however, the 2nd and third sentence essentially say the same. Try not to use the same word more than once, especially in the same paragraph, dive more into themes and answer the question. The introduction should sum up your essay without narrating the play.
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Is this GCSE or A level? First sentence starts off well, however, the 2nd and third sentence essentially say the same. Try not to use the same word more than once, especially in the same paragraph, dive more into themes and answer the question. The introduction should sum up your essay without narrating the play.
Is this GCSE or A level? First sentence starts off well, however, the 2nd and third sentence essentially say the same. Try not to use the same word more than once, especially in the same paragraph, dive more into themes and answer the question. The introduction should sum up your essay without narrating the play.
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Hey I've got a practice coursework essay on the real inspector hound- I struggle with essay intro's so any advice would be appreciated on my first attempt(intro below)
Stoppard manipulates various expectations and styles to create dramatic effect in ‘The Real Inspector Hound’. ‘The Real Inspector Hound’ is an absurdist satirical parody of the exemplar ‘whodunit’ genre popularised by Agatha Christie in the early 20th Century. Stoppard in ‘The Real Inspector Hound’ manipulates our expectations of the play, the ‘whodunit’ genre and the dialogue to create a fictional reality as well as comic effect.
Hey I've got a practice coursework essay on the real inspector hound- I struggle with essay intro's so any advice would be appreciated on my first attempt(intro below)
Stoppard manipulates various expectations and styles to create dramatic effect in ‘The Real Inspector Hound’. ‘The Real Inspector Hound’ is an absurdist satirical parody of the exemplar ‘whodunit’ genre popularised by Agatha Christie in the early 20th Century. Stoppard in ‘The Real Inspector Hound’ manipulates our expectations of the play, the ‘whodunit’ genre and the dialogue to create a fictional reality as well as comic effect.
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Sounds like you've copied your teacher verbatim; "an absurdist satirical parody of the exemplar ‘whodunit’ genre popularised by Agatha Christie in the early 20th Century". And it's not really an intro, more the middle of a paragraph.
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