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Original post by Nessie_dd
OMG! You are great! You sound like the best teacher i ever had! HAHAHAHA!
Thank you so much... And, I must confess, I was trying to sound so... aham... smart and poetic... And it didn't go that well, han?
HAHAHAAH! xD


Hahah, noo it definitely makes you sound smart! Just, some of its a bit unnecessary cause in general conversation you wouldn't really use the phrases thats all. Pretty impressive you can use those phrases at all though!
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Original post by Rosalind

Original post by Rosalind
Like some others, I've changed some parts and put them in bold :smile:
Best of luck!

Edit: your English is very impressive!


Thank you... you helped me as well as the others! xD
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Thank you!! xD
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Ok... Guys, I'm tryng to use all of your advice to make a hell of a email! xP
But just a question...
This setence: "I started my education in Portugal, and I will to finish in Cape Verde.."
Doesn't require a «it» between finish and in
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Original post by twelve

Original post by twelve
Really good :smile: Amazing in fact considering you say your english isn't great! Changed a few grammatical things, and all the italics are just little notes I thought might be useful. You could send it the way you wrote it and they'd understand, but I can tell you want it to soud the best it can :smile: Good luck!


Hey! Just one more question... Since I've got to apply a year before I finnish high school... What grades do I put on my curriculum?
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Title is misleading, there is nothing formal about an e-mail.
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Original post by Nessie_dd
Hey! Just one more question... Since I've got to apply a year before I finnish high school... What grades do I put on my curriculum?


You will fill out UCAS and say your final grades are 'pending' - its an option to put in :smile: And when your current teachers write your reference, they will put your predicted grades.

Original post by Nessie_dd
Ok... Guys, I'm tryng to use all of your advice to make a hell of a email! xP
But just a question...
This setence: "I started my education in Portugal, and I will to finish in Cape Verde.."
Doesn't require a «it» between finish and in


You want to say - "I started my education in Portugal, and I will finish it in Cape Verde."

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