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    Now the worst type of advert has to be comparing adverts

    i would replace comparing with comparison

    apart from that it is very good
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    (Original post by the bear)
    Now the worst type of advert has to be comparing adverts

    i would replace comparing with comparison

    apart from that it is very good
    Ok, yeh that sounds better, thank you
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    I did this assessment last year, mine was on my super sweet sixteen. I agree with the bear it is very good, also I remember in mine I used an extended metaphor and I that's what got me the higher mark so you might want to incorporate that somehow. Good luck!
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    (Original post by meee?)
    I did this assessment last year, mine was on my super sweet sixteen. I agree with the bear it is very good, also I remember in mine I used an extended metaphor and I that's what got me the higher mark so you might want to incorporate that somehow. Good luck!
    Thank you i will try and think of something for the extended metaphor thanks
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    i think this is brilliant. u should get a* for that. guess what! i am gonna copy some your work :-p. plz don't get angry otherwise i am gonna make you watch comparison adverts for 30 minute. lol
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    Edited OP I see..
 
 
 
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