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at this moment. one of my best friends is drinking in a bar alone somewhere in Scotland....she might got drunk tonight...

it's not necessary but she needs it , i don't know why, neither herself....
most of time you knew it was stupid but you still did it. no help...

suffering? struggling?

love hurts,,,everyone knows, but no one can refuse it.
we just practise our psychokinesis in this game and fade our soul in the air, gone with the wind.

maybe we never be the butterfly, and will be the desperate moth in this war which named love.
but
could you?
never blame yourself if you got a soul, sensitive one...
never complain if you fall in love with a wrong person....
you choosed it, all you can do is just take it and try to find the solution..

you can not relax, you care about so much more the people whom you love.
how could we forget ourselves in this situation?

why we never be strong in a relationship?
love never be perfect because we are living in a non-perfect world.

what's the most miserable thing in this planet?
i thnk that should be you fall in love deeply with someone whom you never find yourself in his eyes...
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What The Smeg?...

freaking tweens.
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that better not be an attempt at writing poetry.
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amber is such a nice name.

"why we never be strong in a relationship? "

back to basics with english :P
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Love hurts......and?
There's nothing new about this. It's one of nature's pitfalls, if love was rosy all the time then practically most of the media would be out of a job.
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i don't understand I feel thick now
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your not thick its a thick post as everyone know love hurts
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F for GCSE Poetry I see.
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(Original post by amber_z)
at this moment. one of my best friends is drinking in a bar alone somewhere in Scotland....she might got drunk tonight...

it's not necessary but she needs it , i don't know why, neither herself....
most of time you knew it was stupid but you still did it. no help...

suffering? struggling?

love hurts,,,everyone knows, but no one can refuse it.
we just practise our psychokinesis in this game and fade our soul in the air, gone with the wind.

maybe we never be the butterfly, and will be the desperate moth in this war which named love.
but
could you?
never blame yourself if you got a soul, sensitive one...
never complain if you fall in love with a wrong person....
you choosed it, all you can do is just take it and try to find the solution..

you can not relax, you care about so much more the people whom you love.
how could we forget ourselves in this situation?

why we never be strong in a relationship?
love never be perfect because we are living in a non-perfect world.

what's the most miserable thing in this planet?
i thnk that should be you fall in love deeply with someone whom you never find yourself in his eyes...
I personally think this poem is quite REAL. It's not as ununderstandable as those so-called great poem.
The last sentence makes me understand how much hurt my ex. i'm really sorry for him now........really really.........
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(Original post by zav)
your not thick its a thick post as everyone know love hurts
Thick post eh?
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The last sentence makes me understand how much hurt my ex. i'm really sorry for him now........really really.........

The last sentance makes no sense...:\
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The last sentance makes no sense...:\
maybe haven't experience this yet.
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maybe haven't experience this yet.
I meant it's hardly English...I understand what the OP is saying (barely).
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that better not be an attempt at writing poetry.
:rofl:
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don't know why, but it makes me cry. specially the last sentence.
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