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    House again.

    Spent a lot more time on this one and tried to get it as melodic as i could. Still needs work but i'm still learning and progressing.

    https://soundcloud.com/ohm-3/mind-game

    Tell me what you think, SAFE.
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    (Original post by jack747)
    House again.

    Spent a lot more time on this one and tried to get it as melodic as i could. Still needs work but i'm still learning and progressing.

    https://soundcloud.com/ohm-3/mind-game

    Tell me what you think, SAFE.
    what are you meaning by safe?

    i listen and i think is nice, but you would sounding better if maybe try putting in some oud or santoor in it? and maybe some darbukka sample instead of drum repetition like a lot of this music.
    also maybe try looking at using different maqaams?


    did you record using microphone?
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    (Original post by Mullah.S)
    what are you meaning by safe?

    i listen and i think is nice, but you would sounding better if maybe try putting in some oud or santoor in it? and maybe some darbukka sample instead of drum repetition like a lot of this music.
    also maybe try looking at using different maqaams?


    did you record using microphone?
    Dance music is often pretty repetitive, i do agree it could use more layers and instruments in the background to keep the listener happy.
    Its mostly sample based i didn't record anything into this one.
 
 
 
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