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    Ocean Call

    Oh listless ocean, don’t stop curling
    as long as I tread the sands that
    call you,
    call you.

    And when my world appears to fall and,
    the cycle of my days are choked by
    haze. Don’t stop drifting,
    as long as I walk the sands that
    call you.

    For every tear there is a sea, and a sky
    that seems to flood the gulf of you and I,
    so please, don’t stop shining,
    as long as I touch the sands that
    call you.

    And with a final plea, oh to you the placid sea,
    I beg for you to stay. Forget the tides
    and the passing of the days,
    just tell me you won’t stop beating,
    as long as I free the sands that
    call you.

    Oh, listless ocean, don’t stop curling
    as long as I tread the sands that
    call you,
    call you.

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