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Last edited by Lakesx; 20-09-2015 at 00:56.
- 11-03-2013 22:16
- 13-03-2013 14:21
It's really good! Very descriptive in the setting and scenery. If it's being seen through the eyes of a seven year old, maybe you could use language that more of a seven year old would use? Just a suggestion.