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    There was a young poet called Giles
    Whose wife was a martyr to piles;
    Whilst penning an ode
    He heard them explode...


    My Muse has fled ...please suggest the last line
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    Life, wealth, and women were temporal, and in him was his true abode.
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    (Original post by MENDACIUM)
    Life, wealth, and women were temporal, and in him was his true abode.
    hmmm i'm really looking for an 8 syllable line which completes the rhyming scheme AABBA

    thank you so much for your interesting suggestion
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    it was heard by many for miles???
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    (Original post by ccfcadam36)
    it was heard by many for miles???


    that is the best suggestion so far...
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    and stored her expulsions in vials
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    (Original post by memomemootoo)
    and stored her expulsions in vials
    this is so revolting that it is the winner !!
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    this is so revolting that it is the winner !!
    yay :ahee:
 
 
 
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