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    Hey guys, I desperately need to get 2 A's on both my coursework pieces, for the comparitive essay and also the second essay where you pick Marxism/Feminism/Metaphor and so forth.

    I got 2 A's on both pieces from last year very easily(first draft), but for some reason my new teacher thinks my essay is currently sitting at a low band. If someone can take a look at my first essay and help me push it up? Would be much appreciated.

    My skype is icyg.istudios or you can PM me on here. I'll reply in the thread too.
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