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    I am in the process of creating a shounen manga series and looking for feedback on my introduction of the series Chosen.
    I have notes which includes the world system, backgrounds, backstory and three arcs worth of story. The name manga would have been called Chosen.

    P.S. Ignore the spelling and grammar mistakes, I did it while brainstorming and will break it down to different parts.


    Sora Sakimono who is known as the future keeper was visited by Ryu Kazuya who is one of the royal guardians that is searching for answers for the future as he is worried that something terrible could happen. While Ryu ask Sora to try and predict an important event from the near future which Sora did without much effort he used his abilities.
    Sora has a vision that the realm of shadows is getting destroyed by an infamous group called the Gaijinbutai (legionnaire) and that the second demon war was coming. Ryu who hears about this goes to The Demon Order (the government) about this and they have a meeting that only the chosen one could handle this and with this information, Sora is searching for the chosen one who is a human that has the demon genes (DNA) who could potentially stop the coming of the second demon war and when Sora founded the chosen one, Ryu puts his instincts to the test by going after the chosen one.

    Ganbou who is a 19 years old teenager who goes to high school in Tokyo, Japan had experienced his worst days four years ago when he witnessed his parents killed by a demonic being who gave a disgusting laugh and vanish. Now traumatized from the experience, Ganbou has nightmares regularly and just when he came from high school a mysterious being with a strong presence was waiting for him to explain who killed his parents now Ganbou has full of questions when he finds out the existence of demons and other supernatural beings.

    This mysterious being called Ryu Kazuya explains that he is the royal guardian who serves to protect the royal demons and maintain the balance order in the shadow realm and gave 2 choices to live his normal human life without any trouble for the rest of his life or to get revenge for the unknown demon that killed his parents and help maintain the balance of the world as he knows it. The royal guardian tells Ganbou that he has three days to make his decision and with this information Ganbou is deciding which the right choice to make while going on his everyday activities.
    Ryu is waiting for his reply for three days and choose to stay in Ganbou house for the time being,during this time while Ganbou was attending high school, Ryu sensed an evil genki (energy) nearby that was secretly stalking Ganbou but wants to find out the purpose of the demon while second day Ryu sensed another demon called Mara that was giving nightmares to Ganbou for the past four years and goes stronger with each nightmare that its victim has and Ryu called the Mara to challenge it to a battle.

    To be continued.....
    I have more content but put this for the time.
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