Seriously? You're in a study help section posting full essays asking other students what grade/how many marks you'll get?
The fact that we don't even know what level this is at (high school/undergraduate) only hinders any possible advice further.
You should have a course handbook outlining ILOs/marking guidelines. Consult that and apply a bit of thinking.
TSR have an excellent study section and a sister website called Marked by Teachers - I don't know if this would be more helpful for you. But for the record, I'd consider deleting this post - I'm assuming you'll be submitting the essay via an electronic plagiarism-checker? It'll show up...