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I have a writing assessment coming up in German, it is based on the Environment (die Umwelt).
I have the first 2 paragraphs sorted (what I do for the environment and what I will do/what I have done for the environment) but I'm stuck on the rest. The questions are environmental problems and solutions for them.
I have a little bit written for it but it's not enough and I don't know how to expand or write anymore without repeating myself too much. Here is what I have so far:

Das größte Umweltproblem ist, dass es zu viel Müll. Für mich ist das schrecklich! Man sollte den Mull trennen und man sollte recyceln. Es gibt auch zu viel Wasserverschmutzung, gibt es zu viel Lärm. Ich denke, dass schlecht ist. Es gibt keine Lösung!

Could anyone add a little bit more or tell me what else to put? I was hoping to add something linking floods in England with global warming, but don't know how to do so...Also, using more varied vocabulary. I need help quick!
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(Original post by Caitlinnnmay)
I have a writing assessment coming up in German, it is based on the Environment (die Umwelt).
I have the first 2 paragraphs sorted (what I do for the environment and what I will do/what I have done for the environment) but I'm stuck on the rest. The questions are environmental problems and solutions for them.
I have a little bit written for it but it's not enough and I don't know how to expand or write anymore without repeating myself too much. Here is what I have so far:

Das größte Umweltproblem ist, dass es zu viel Müll. Für mich ist das schrecklich! Man sollte den Mull trennen und man sollte recyceln. Es gibt auch zu viel Wasserverschmutzung, gibt es zu viel Lärm. Ich denke, dass schlecht ist. Es gibt keine Lösung!

Could anyone add a little bit more or tell me what else to put? I was hoping to add something linking floods in England with global warming, but don't know how to do so...Also, using more varied vocabulary. I need help quick!
Hi i do German for GCSE and reccently finished the topic on environment.
...You can talk about issues with global warming if you have not already, floods..... talk about buying environmently friendly products......walsking instead of using public transport.....polution...- Sorry not much.
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(Original post by Caitlinnnmay)
I have a writing assessment coming up in German, it is based on the Environment (die Umwelt).
I have the first 2 paragraphs sorted (what I do for the environment and what I will do/what I have done for the environment) but I'm stuck on the rest. The questions are environmental problems and solutions for them.
I have a little bit written for it but it's not enough and I don't know how to expand or write anymore without repeating myself too much. Here is what I have so far:

Das größte Umweltproblem ist, dass es zu viel Müll. Für mich ist das schrecklich! Man sollte den Mull trennen und man sollte recyceln. Es gibt auch zu viel Wasserverschmutzung, gibt es zu viel Lärm. Ich denke, dass schlecht ist. Es gibt keine Lösung!

Could anyone add a little bit more or tell me what else to put? I was hoping to add something linking floods in England with global warming, but don't know how to do so...Also, using more varied vocabulary. I need help quick!
Hi i do German for GCSE and reccently finished the topic on environment
.... You can talsk about pollution and global warming if you did not already...buying environmently friendly products....walking instead of using public transpaort....-sorry not much.
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