idk but i can help with the main body of the essay. like have you used PEA? or PEE.
but its basically your Point Evidence and Analysis/Evaluation.
this means that you make a
- topic sentence to state your point
- then add in evidence to support that point
- after, go in depth by adding a lot of analysis to the extract that you picked out using various techniques used like metaphors, similies, alliteration etc. make sure you link back to the question if necessary