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help with my part-time CV

first, i'm in engalnd, so do i need to put my national insurance number on it?
this is the first copy:
i'm trying to find a summer part-time because none of the work experiences replied me; currently in year 11
most of the part-times out there would be waiter, shop assistant etc...


*****NAME*****
Home Address: *****(home address)**********
Telephone number: none
E-mail address: *********@gmail.com
** (post code)
Personal attributes:
Quick learner, efficient worker, keen learner, knowledge pursuing, knowledgeable, good communicator, task abled, challenger, good co-operator, reliable, self-motivated, good with technology
Education and qualifications
Sept 2009 – present
***school name***
AS level 2013 Mathematics (A)
GCSE 2012 Mathematics (A*), Biology (A*), Chinese (A*), Chemistry (A),Physics (B)
Working experiences
June 2013 Shop assistant, ***book shop name***
(2 week period) responsible for shelf stacking, restocking, internet store management, register management, store setup, finance management
Personal Development
Languages Cantonese, Mandarin, English
Technology programing, 3d modelling, web designing
arts wood crafting, painting
Music grade 5 piano, grade 3 trumpet, grade 1 drums
Interests
Technology 3d modelling, program scripting (python)
Original post by vin1832
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You aren't giving them any evidence that you have the skills to do a retail job, or a waitering job etc. Deep in the middle there's a string of words to do with retail, but it's not evidence.

Take it to the CV Help thread where you can discuss details in a private forum.
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Izy97
You're best asking for help on the CV Help thread, here.
When I created a CV, I used a CV builder (Just run a Google search on 'CV Builder'), and it should give you websites which will help you create a professional looking CV with all of the relevant information.

Good luck job hunting:smile:

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