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I was dong a past paper and came across this question I only got 2/4 so could someone be kind enough to show me a 4/4 response so I can see what I should doo thanx in advance





In 1918 France wanted Germany to pay for causing the war.


Describe how the War Guilt Clause and the Reparations Settlement tried to achieve this.




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here is the mark scheme



[TD="width: 50%, colspan: 2"] Detailed description of limited aspects
e.g. develops one of the following:
detail of the war guilt clause – number 231, wording etc.;
Effect of war guilt clause – moral responsibility – connection with reparations etc.;
Reparations – set in 1921 - details £6,600 million over 42 years – later reduction etc.;
Thinking behind reparations – their purpose (damage to France qualified such by ‘more’ or by an example e.g. land industry etc – previous wars etc.
One accurate idea which goes beyond simple/general (2 marks).
Two for 3 marks.
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Limited description of a wider range of aspects
e.g. Outline description of war guilt and reparations.
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[TD="width: 50%, colspan: 2"] 2-3
[/TD]


[TD="width: 33%"] Level 3:
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[TD="width: 33%, colspan: 2"] Detailed description of several aspects
e.g. at least two of the points mentioned in the first part of level 2.
Or could give 3 accurate ideas on any relevant point(s).
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[TD="width: 33%"] 4
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I have been given the exact past paper for a homework assignment and came onto this website to look for advice. I have not yet had my homework marked yet but i hope it can give you some ideas on areas of improvent, etc.

France believed that Germany should be severely punished as Germany started the war and most of the war was fought on French soil, meaning that the most damage was caused in France. France succeeded in their demand as Germany was given a list of many different punishes that were set in order to make Germany pay and to also prevent a war from occurring in the future. The Treaty of Versailles decided that Germany should have to pay £6.6 billion for reparations as this would cause problems for Germanys income and therefore preventing another war. The Treaty of Versailles also reduced the amount of army and naval populations that Germany was allowed. Germany was restricted to 100,000 men in their army, lastly, no German troops were allowed in the Rhinelands and only 6 battleships.
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(Original post by artymaniac)
Hi,
I was dong a past paper and came across this question I only got 2/4 so could someone be kind enough to show me a 4/4 response so I can see what I should doo thanx in advance



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here is the mark scheme



[TD="width: 50%, colspan: 2"] Detailed description of limited aspects
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Limited description of a wider range of aspects
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[TD="width: 50%, colspan: 2"] 2-3
[/TD]


[TD="width: 33%"] Level 3:
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[TD="width: 33%, colspan: 2"] Detailed description of several aspects
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[TD="width: 33%"] 4
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Hi, I have been given the exact past paper for a homework assignment and came onto this website to look for advice. I have not yet had my homework marked yet but i hope it can give you some ideas on areas of improvent, etc. France believed that Germany should be severely punished as Germany started the war and most of the war was fought on French soil, meaning that the most damage was caused in France. France succeeded in their demand as Germany was given a list of many different punishes that were set in order to make Germany pay and to also prevent a war from occurring in the future. The Treaty of Versailles decided that Germany should have to pay £6.6 billion for reparations as this would cause problems for Germanys income and therefore preventing another war. The Treaty of Versailles also reduced the amount of army and naval populations that Germany was allowed. Germany was restricted to 100,000 men in their army, lastly, no German troops were allowed in the Rhinelands and only 6 battleships
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