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Salvation watch

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    This one i worked hard on, i hope it gets better feedback then my last post :p:

    The river isn’t empty
    Or forgotten.
    It flows slowly still,
    Deep and rotten.

    Crimes have all been held within,
    What empathy
    The river had and still
    The river isn’t empty

    The water isn’t friendly
    Anymore then
    The bridges built over,
    Or forgotten.

    We still sinned after given
    Chances again
    But the rivers full now,
    Deep and Rotten.

    The river isn’t empty
    Crimes have all been kept within
    The water isn’t friendly
    We still sinned after given
    Chances again.
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