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    Hi can anybody help me rewrite my introduction as I only got 15 out of 40 points!

    It states I should show, 'collection and selection of primary and secondary data' - What does this mean (examples if possible?)

    Thx!
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    How can anyone rewrite something that isn't availiable to be rewritten, type it out and i'm sure someone will help.
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    How can anyone rewrite something that isn't availiable to be rewritten, type it out and i'm sure someone will help.
    Yes... what is it? is it fieldwork? Sounds as though you need a methodology table to identify (for each of your Key Questions) the types of data collected (eg questionnaire, pedestrian count etc) why you chose to collect the data, where and when you collected the data, how you collected it (eg sampling, sample size etc) what were the problems/ limitations in collecting it and how you tried to solve the problems. Some syllabuses allow you to do a table with the headings I've just suggested and a list of the types of data down the side. You need to check whether they allow a table, otherwise you could just use them as paragraph headings.
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    I could possibly help, i got 38/40 on my castleton coursework. Just show me what you got and ill tell you suggestions of things to write about.
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    I basically just want a few example Introductions, I've done the data collection 'how-to' bit

    Should I just add lots of Secondary information (I have some booket that I never used before on secondary info!)
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