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    Hi, i've got a coursework for tuesday - can someone please take a quick look few my essay and make a few corrections to improve it

    many thanks in advance
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    assuming it's the personal study? if so:
    can't give you anything specific but from what i saw in the first 2 pages you might wanna
    - throw in some more historians' opinions
    - don't just say facts/dates, explain them and find a way to work in your opinion about their significance
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    yh, thx a lot, i've added views from historians such as Ambrose and M.Hastings
 
 
 
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