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    Studies show that a huge estimate of people smoking today see it as a harmless treat, that they may enjoy occasionally. Little do they know how bad it is for the human body and how smoking is having a staggering effect on everyone who is exposed to smoking or smokers. Many illnesses arise form smoking, for example, illness like Heart attacks, lung damage and cancer are a huge risk, and will have an effect on every smoker. People may also recognise that they are ageing,or may not look appealing when looking in the mirror, as this addiction also has a disadvantage on the physical appearance of many smokers.
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    Studies show that a huge estimate of people smoking today see it as a harmless threat, that they may occasionally swapped it- sounds better enjoy . Little do they know how bad it is for the human body and how smoking is having a staggering effect on everyone who is exposed to smoking or smokers. Many illnesses arise form smoking, for example, illnesses like Heart attacks, lung damage and cancer are a huge risk not here and will have an effect on every smoker. People may also recognise that they are ageing not here or may not look appealing when looking in the mirror, as this addiction also has a disadvantage on the physical appearance of many smokers.

    a few places I've highlighted which don't need a comma but otherwise fine
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    (Original post by Highfiveyou)
    Studies show that a huge estimate of people smoking today see it as a harmless treat, that they may enjoy occasionally. Little do they know how bad it is for the human body and how smoking is having a staggering effect on everyone who is exposed to smoking or smokers. Many illnesses arise form smoking, for example, illness like Heart attacks, lung damage and cancer are a huge risk and will have an effect on every smoker. People may also recognise that they are ageing,or may not look appealing when looking in the mirror, as this addiction also has a disadvantage on the physical appearance of many smokers.
    Studies show a huge estimate of people smoking today see it as a harmless treat they may occasionally enjoy. Little do they know how bad it is for the human body and how smoking is having a staggering effect on everyone who is exposed to smoking or smokers. Many illnesses arise form smoking, for example, illnesses like Heart attacks, lung damage, and cancer are a huge risk and will have an effect on every smoker. People may also recognise they are ageing or may not look appealing when looking in the mirror, as this addiction also has a disadvantage on the physical appearance of many smokers.
 
 
 
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