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Many businesses have many business ideas, and this is where market research comes in. Market research enables businesses to understand the trends of today, and for different existing markets. Although many tends go out of fashion eventually, their is still a minority of people who still love past trends and this is why business continue to sell some products for longer. If businesses intended to aim a new product at teenagers, then they would have to observe the younger market.
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Many businesses have many business ideas, and this is where market research comes in. Market research enables businesses to understand the trends of today, and for different existing markets. Although many tends go out of fashion eventually, their is still a minority of people who still love past trends and this is why business continue to sell some products for longer. If businesses intended to aim a new product at teenagers, then they would have to observe the younger market.
Trends* in 3rd sentence. There* businesses* intend*.

Your use of commas is okay, I guess... However, could be improved if you use a semicolon between the past trends comment and the 'this is why....'
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I'm staring university do you think I will be okay with the punctuation I am using? I'm slightly worried that is why I'm improving my grammar.
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I'm staring university do you think I will be okay with the punctuation I am using? I'm slightly worried that is why I'm improving my grammar.
How are you starting uni if this is in the GCSE forum? And it's not really up to that level of academia, definitely need more practice. It also depends on what you plan to study there.
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I Put it in GCSE forum, as the subject is English based. I cant exactly put it in a science forum.
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English GCSE*. well I did receive unconditional offers, so I do believe the Universities do think I'm academically capable of studying at university. I just need to sort my confusion with commas, that is all.
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but thanks for the advise
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