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Although I had spent many years at school, I still had a driven passion to improve my knowledge and understanding. Being independent, and progressing my knowledge and ideas further;also,had a great advantage on my ability to adapt new skills and information.

is this punctuated correctly? I don't feel keen on the semi colon. Let me know if it's okay
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Although I had spent many years at school, I still had a driven passion to improve my knowledge and understanding. Being independent not here and progressing my knowledge and ideas further not here also nor here had a great advantage on my ability to adapt new skills and information.

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