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What do you think this would get for GCSE standard german writing assessment.

Meine schule ist zu gross! Die schule ist unfreundlich und ich mag meine schule uniform nicht. weil sie hasslich ist. Meiner meinung nach ist das sehr unfair. Ich bin sehr schlecht in Physik. Ich finde Chemie ist furchtbar,weil es langweilig.Biologie ist schwierig. Man darf nicht lachen oder plaudern, weil meiner lehrer gemein ist. sie war schlecht unfreundlich weil sie sehr war. Man muss die toiletten sauber machen weil sie sehr alt waren, diese schule ist langweilig ich hasse mathe, weil ich schlechte Noten bekomme. Ich mag Englisch obgleich ich es sehr ermudend finde. Ich werde nächste Jahr in die oberstufe gehen. In der schule ich habe Mathe, Deutsch, Erdkunde, Englisch, Informatik und Naturwissenschaft. ich finde erdkunde ist sehr gut weil es interessant. In Mathe habe ich eine schlecht note bekommen. Die stunden sind meistens gut, obwohl ich mathe hasse. Ich denke dass die uniform hasslich ist. Ich trage schwarze jacke und schwarze Hose. Ich besuche ein Gymnasium. Es gibt 500 schüler. Ich bin in Klasse 11. Mein lieblingsfach ist erdkunde und ich lerne nicht gern kunst. Ich werde in die oberstufe gehen wo ich Erdkunde,Naturwissens und Informatik lernen werde. Ich hoffe, dass die Schule besser wird weil es zu streng ist.
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The grammar is on the whole very good (watch out for 'in der Schule habe ich' and 'ich finde Erdkunde sehr gut'). If the question is about your opinion of your school then content is good. I would say that the grammatical structures are a little basic and you could jazz it up with 'da' and 'denn (doesn't change the word order)' instead of weil everywhere. Towards the end it also becomes a little tedious with all the very short sentences. Maybe these could be condensed a bit into longer sentences using connectives. Overall, based on my previous GCSE German experience I would say it would get between 18-22, however I am only a student, not a teacher so can't give a definitive answer!
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