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I am a foreigner, english is my second laguage. I would be so glad if somebody helped me out and read my short essays. Any recomendations. suggestions or corrected mistakes are greatly appreciated.
Here is my first essay


Music can name the unnamable and communicate the unknowable.

Sometimes it is so hard to find the right words for expressing what we feel at the moment. In these kind of situation music can be the answer. It can speak without words.
Music is a way of expression. Musicians lay out their heart in their songs, and listeners can feel it. Music is a secret communication between the musician and a listener. The melody itself can make you feel happy, sad or angry. Even if you dont know what you really feel like, after listening to an appropriate song, you get better. You know you are not alone, you have a friend somewhere in this world.
It is easier to understand music than words. You can not know my language, but we both will understand the language of notes. Play me a song, and I will know how you feel. Tell me what you feel and there is a chance i will not understand. Every song has it’s message. It can bring people together, encourage to do what your heart desires, find love, forgive or move on. Music is a very powerful weapon. It can do both good or bad. Musician’s responsibility is to figure out what kind of effect he wants to create.
The affect music can leave on people is magical. It truly can name the unnamable and communicate the unknowable. Music is a language of feelings. It brings out empathy in anyone.
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