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I have two sentences that needs proof reading and corrected grammatically and the use of commas. This is for my work experience cv so please kindly help me. Highly appreciated.


A) Having studied biology, has enhanced my technique to interpret data and also, frame hypotheses and make predictions to test it.


B) Being an sales assistant and having played rugby in my previous school, has enhanced my communication skills.


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(Original post by varshanct95)
I have two sentences that needs proof reading and corrected grammatically and the use of commas. This is for my work experience cv so please kindly help me. Highly appreciated.


A) Having studied biology, has enhanced my technique to interpret data and also, frame hypotheses and make predictions to test it.


B) Being an sales assistant and having played rugby in my previous school, has enhanced my communication skills.


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Your putting commas in the wrong places.


should be:

A) Studying Biology has helped enhance my ability to interpret data and also frame hypotheses and make predictions.

B) I have enhanced my communication skills through a wide range of activities, from being a sales assistant at 'XXXX' to playing rugby in my previous school.
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Your putting commas in the wrong places.


should be:

A) Studying Biology has helped enhance my ability to interpret data and also frame hypotheses and make predictions.

B) I have enhanced my communication skills through a wide range of activities, from being a sales assistant at 'XXXX' to playing rugby in my previous school.
But I have already finished studying biology last year...,it's a past tense...I am not studying it anymore. I'm so confused? And thanks for ur reply!
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But I have already finished studying biology last year...,it's a past tense...I am not studying it anymore. I'm so confused? And thanks for ur reply!

If you want to leave it as 'having studied biology' then there should be no comma immediately after it.
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