Spanish GCSE Speaking Draft Corrections

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Describe your city
Vivo en Southwark esta el surreste de Londres, desde hace un siette anos. En Londres hay siempre mucho que hacer. La attracion mas popular para los turisticas es Torre de Londres pero hay muchos otras cosas que puedes hacer como: ver una pelicula al cine, or incluso cenar en unos de los restaurantes. Para mi la mejar que hacer es ir al Rio Tamesis y tener una excursion en barco. El sabado pasado asisti a un festival de musica cerca de Hyde Park con mi amigo muy cercano que de la mina. Tuve un gran tiempo. iFue una expiriencia maravillosa!
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Say where you like living there or not
Me gusta mi ciudad porque yo creci alli y tengo muchos recuerdos. Por el etro lado no me gusta ciudad porque hay mucho trafico y contaminacion sin mencionar la vida es tan cara porque cuesta mucho para alquilar una casa. Creo que lo mejor Londres es el sistema de transporte util que hace muy facil moverse por Londres. Lo malo es que disfortunadamente el clima aqui es my malo siempre es frio y lluvioso significa que es casi nunca cualquier sol.


These are two sections of my draft.
Is there a good use of vocabulary and sentence structures?
Any corrections to be made? or anything that doesn't make sense?
Any different words or structures to use?
Anything else to add, which will boost the level up?

What grade would you give it?

Thank you.
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I don't do Spanish, but there's a website called lang-8 where you can post your work and get it corrected by native speakers, I use it for German and find it really helps!
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I don't do Spanish, but there's a website called lang-8 where you can post your work and get it corrected by native speakers, I use it for German and find it really helps!
Wow really?!?

Do they correct it quickly?

Thank you for the advice.
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