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imasomeone
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Hello people,

This is my first TSR post so sorry if I do something wrong. I have a French essay (about half a page) however I need to change it because some parts of it look like they are form Google translate because the sentence structure is odd and there are a few grammatical errors. Could somebody please look over it for me and tell me how I could change it/ improve it to make it more simpler and better (sentence structures. grammatical mistakes etc.) but so that it is still the same level of work (it contains the same tenses, connectives and aspects that would et it high marks - I really need an A* in this in order to pass French as a whole).

Please tell me if you would like to help and I will PM it to you.

Thanks a lot
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Hi
I could offer some help.
I got A* for French IGCSE and I've lived in France for 3 years.

French is my 3rd language and is the weakest of 3, so my French is by no means perfect, but I think I will be able to help making it a little bit better. Final grammatical correction should be done by your teacher though :P

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(Original post by imasomeone)
Hello people,

This is my first TSR post so sorry if I do something wrong. I have a French essay (about half a page) however I need to change it because some parts of it look like they are form Google translate because the sentence structure is odd and there are a few grammatical errors. Could somebody please look over it for me and tell me how I could change it/ improve it to make it more simpler and better (sentence structures. grammatical mistakes etc.) but so that it is still the same level of work (it contains the same tenses, connectives and aspects that would et it high marks - I really need an A* in this in order to pass French as a whole).

Please tell me if you would like to help and I will PM it to you.

Thanks a lot
Hey, I would love to help you PM me

Hope this helps
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