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You haven't made it clear what you're confused about? Is it the wording of your introduction?
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You haven't made it clear what you're confused about? Is it the wording of your introduction?
Structure of essay.

So far, I've stated what the bio approach is, then gave one type of treatment/method i.e. dopamine hypothesis. Said what kind of treatment patient can get, etc.

I think I'm doing it wrong?
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Structure of essay.

So far, I've stated what the bio approach is, then gave one type of treatment/method i.e. dopamine hypothesis. Said what kind of treatment patient can get, etc.

I think I'm doing it wrong?
Is this for A Level psychology? And if yes is it a 24 marker?
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Is this for A Level psychology? And if yes is it a 24 marker?
Yes! It is!

I've done well with my first two essays, but this one is proving otherwise...
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Yes! It is!

I've done well with my first two essays, but this one is proving otherwise...
Well I did Psyc last year and enjoy it If I were answering the quesiton I would:

A01: Briefly explain one biological explanation (really briefly - only 3 or 4 sentences)

A01: Explain the biological treatment

A02: Evaluate the biological treatment

A01: Briefly explain one psyc explanation (really briefly - only 3 or 4 sentences)

A01: Explain the psyc treatment

A02: Evaluate to psyc treatment
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Well I did Psyc last year and enjoy it If I were answering the quesiton I would:

A01: Briefly explain one biological explanation (really briefly - only 3 or 4 sentences)

A01: Explain the biological treatment

A02: Evaluate the biological treatment

A01: Briefly explain one psyc explanation (really briefly - only 3 or 4 sentences)

A01: Explain the psyc treatment

A02: Evaluate to psyc treatment
You've finished your A-levels then?

I really appreciate your help! Thank you!
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You've finished your A-levels then?

I really appreciate your help! Thank you!
Yep, currently on a gap year
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