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I'm getting annoyed now because I feel like I'm not moving forward in this subject as my teacher isn't much help as the teacher doesn't explain things very well making most of the class confused. When we ask her to explain what they mean it gets even more confusing plus its time consuming as we don't get enough done in class as we should.

I would just like to ask how do you get full marks in 13 mark and 18 mark essays. I understand the basics like make sure you use evidence from the case study (A03) and justify your answers (A04) and knowledge of the topics isn't the problem. I just need someone to tell me a structure for an essay, tips for writing them and maybe a small example??

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Hello,

I'm getting annoyed now because I feel like I'm not moving forward in this subject as my teacher isn't much help as the teacher doesn't explain things very well making most of the class confused. When we ask her to explain what they mean it gets even more confusing plus its time consuming as we don't get enough done in class as we should.

I would just like to ask how do you get full marks in 13 mark and 18 mark essays. I understand the basics like make sure you use evidence from the case study (A03) and justify your answers (A04) and knowledge of the topics isn't the problem. I just need someone to tell me a structure for an essay, tips for writing them and maybe a small example??

Thank you

Hello, well my teacher told me to make a basic structure of the essay. When I say that I mean have a clear introduction like - outline what you are going to do in the essay. or define a specific keyword which is relevant in the essay. Then give a P-point then E-explain.. is necessary put in an E-example then E -evaluate it. Then L- link it back to the question.

PEEEL - This is what is key
I hope this helps you
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