Is this as french paragraph up to standard??

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Just a Little sketch. Forget if I missed accents and I typed it.

Il va de soi que la musique joue un rôle très important dans la vie pas mal des gens y compris les jeunes. Alors, essayer d'imaginer un monde sans la musique... Via-a-vis ce probleme, je dirai le role que la Musique joue dams la vie des jeunes. J'ai que 16 ans et je me sens que c'est important d'ecouter de la musique.
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(Original post by L'Evil Fish)
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Also to add, I'm 3 months into as french as per everyone who started as French in sept
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'la vie de pas mal de gens', and 'je n'ai que 16 ans'.
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'la vie de pas mal de gens', and 'je n'ai que 16 ans'.
Thanks could you answer the que
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(Original post by Les Les)
Just a Little sketch. Forget if I missed accents and I typed it.

Il va de soi que la musique joue un rôle très important dans la vie pas mal des gens y compris les jeunes. Alors, essayer d'imaginer un monde sans la musique... Via-a-vis ce probleme, je dirai le role que la Musique joue dams la vie des jeunes. J'ai que 16 ans et je me sens que c'est important d'ecouter de la musique.
Also, after sans we don't tend to use the definite article I don't think. Although it isn't wrong to do so.

I'd say je dirais, conditional Seems better.

Je sens que. We dont use the me if we use que.
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