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Hi there, i have an essay to write but i have no idea how to do it or what to write. It has to be around 1500 words.

The question regards General Haig and ww1

"How significant was General Haigs role in world war one?"

Please help I really want to get an A*
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Sorry you've not had any responses about this. Are you sure you’ve posted in the right place? Posting in the specific Study Help forum should help get more responses. Hopefully someone will be able to get back to you
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Do some research on Haig and his role in Military operations during WWI. Develop some interesting points about it and back them up with evidence.

You'll be fine.
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What kind of interesting points. How should i structure my essay
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Which exam board is it?
If you find the Specification then there's probably a generic mark scheme in there that can help you.

Begin with an intro paragraph with some information about Haig.
One point would be that he played a significant role in the strategy of WWI battles on the Western front.
- Quote figures on how many battles he commanded.
Then counter that argument by saying that he didn't play a significant role in the fighting of WWI battles on the Western front. - Quote death Toll - . State that the soldiers that died were more significant than Haig.
Conclude with your own evaluated opinion.

Remember to back your points up with evidence to support your arguments.
Always include a sentence at the end of each paragraph that his role was/wasn't siginificant.
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