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    Hiya I've got my French coursework and I was wondering if you could help me with these sentences and see if they need any corrections? Thanks in advance and I will love you forever!!

    1. Dans ma ville, la plupart des gens reculent leurs déchets cependant ils utilisent aussi les sacs en plastique. Il faut absolument qu'on arrête d'utiliser les sacs en plastique.

    2. La problème dans mon ville est est qu'il n'y a pas beaucoup à faire pour les jeunes, et à cause d'ennuyer, les jeunes se réfugient dans la violence. Aussi, Ladywell(ie. The name of my town) est trop bruyant et il y a beaucoup de circulation c'est pourquoi l'air est sale. Si je pouvais changer quelque chose dans ma ville ce ce serait de criminalité. En plus, j'aimerai qu'il y a moins de voitures sur la roux.

    . Nous avons deux assez grands salons mais seulement trois chambres

    J'aime faire la grasse matinée, mais plupart de temps, mon frère cadet me réveilles à neuf heures. Pourtant le weekend dernier, je me suis réveillée(I want to say 'I woke up even earlier at 7:30)
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    la plupart des gens. I'm not 100% sure but I think coz plupart is a quantity it should be de after it, like with trop or beaucoup.

    2. ville is feminine so it should be "Dans ma ville"

    3. "
    à cause d'ennuyer," Ennuyer is a verb so I think it should be the noun for boredom which is "ennui" (I think maybe google it :/)

    4. "beaucoup de circulation c'est pourquoi l'air est sale" Instead of "c'est pourquoi" maybe think about "donc" (therefore) or "a cause de ca" (sorry can't get accents)


    5." mon frère cadet me réveilles" reveiller is regular so the il form should be "reveille". I don't know if there's some special circumstance here though...

    6.(I want to say 'I woke up even earlier at 7:30) "Je me suis reveille encore plus tot a 7 heures" again can't do accents sorry.


    Hope this helped...if a teacher isn't going to check any of this then maybe leave out the 1st one coz I'm not sure. It sounds really good! Good Luck!!
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    la plupart des gens. I'm not 100% sure but I think coz plupart is a quantity it should be de after it, like with trop or beaucoup.

    2. ville is feminine so it should be "Dans ma ville"

    3. "
    à cause d'ennuyer," Ennuyer is a verb so I think it should be the noun for boredom which is "ennui" (I think maybe google it :/)

    4. "beaucoup de circulation c'est pourquoi l'air est sale" Instead of "c'est pourquoi" maybe think about "donc" (therefore) or "a cause de ca" (sorry can't get accents)


    5." mon frère cadet me réveilles" reveiller is regular so the il form should be "reveille". I don't know if there's some special circumstance here though...

    6.(I want to say 'I woke up even earlier at 7:30) "Je me suis reveille encore plus tot a 7 heures" again can't do accents sorry.


    Hope this helped...if a teacher isn't going to check any of this then maybe leave out the 1st one coz I'm not sure. It sounds really good! Good Luck!!
    Thanks soo much!! I could hug you!
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    Yup quantity is plupart de...always plupart de, just like its always beaucoup de
    Also, try and use opinions just at the start, sounds a whole lot more impressive.

    Par exemple;

    Je dirais que LE probleme principale (problem is masculine) c'est que...
    instead of Aussi, use En Plus,
    use this phrase if you can, il vaudrait mieux s'il y avait moins de la circulation sur ...
    il vaudrait mieux = it would be better if, really good phrase

    Good luck!
 
 
 
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