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    Hi I'm writing a book on wattpad called Burns Me. Here is my synopsis;

    16 year old unpopular Toya has had a tragic heart-breaking life after losing her loved family in a horrific house fire killing her mum and dad, twin sister Tanya, and her little brother. Life truly became a struggle after that as she has to cope with her third-degree burns on her face and body and also living in care.

    After loosing all her self esteem and confidence, will she be accepted by others? Will she find happiness after grief?

    What dya think? any ideas or improvements?

    Thanks x
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