Blue_Birdie
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Hello,
im struggling with my commentary I really do not know how to start, any advise?
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If I'm thinking of the right thing, for the commentary you should pick out certain techniques and bits of language that you used and just explain why you used them. You could also relate it to the style model if you used one. You could say something like: "Here, I decided to use an imperative sentence with a triadic structure. I found this worked well in the style model, as it not only informed the reader, but also provided them with sufficient information". :-)
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