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THREE FACTORS! You don't need to write an introduction, but what is crucial is including three different factors that directly relate to the question. In each of these paragraphs, you should include:
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a) the factor (Rebellion principally sparked from Richard III’s brutal usurpation of the throne in 1483)
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b) evidence to support the factor (despite Edward IV having had a legitimate heir, Edward V, who, despite his young age in spite of not being able to ascend to the throne at 12 years of age , had rightful claim as successor)
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c) explanation (This caused outrage, as Edward IV's line of succession had been interrupted - some people believed Richard did not have true claim to the throne.)
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Where I've added in red, I don't know if you can notice, how significantly more factual it sounds? Examiners are lazy and are simply searching for those who hit the criteria they're marking against, and doing it in a formulaic manner such as this makes it easier for them to spot it. All in the technique
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Here's what one of your three paragraphs should look like:
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Rebellion principally sparked from Richard III’s brutal usurpation of the throne in 1483. Edward IV had a legitimate heir, Edward V, who, in spite of not being able to ascend to the throne at 12 years of age , had rightful claim as successor. This caused outrage, as Edward IV's line of succession had been interrupted - some people believed Richard did not have true claim to the throne.
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[color="#ff0000"]It may seem like you're having to explain what should come as an obvious conclusion, but the examiner doesn't know that, so explain away, as that's what the question's asking you!
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LINKING THE FACTORS. Which you've done really (Overall, it is clear that the outbursts of rebellions in 1483 was the direct result of Richard’s III poor and brutal usurpation of the throne which prevented the formation of support from the public and led to him being an unpopular leader, thus sparking continuous rebellion in 1483.) So that doesn't really need elaborating, apart from ensuring you tie up the end with something which links your three factors together
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Quick Tip: The examiner is literally looking for three factors (PEE'd) and a link. So, whilst you're historiography is lovely, you should save it for the 24 marker as you'll get marks for it there where you won't in the 12! Due to the ridiculous time constraints of this exam, you'll be wanting to save every minute you can!
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THREE FACTORS! You don't need to write an introduction, but what is crucial is including three different factors that directly relate to the question. In each of these paragraphs, you should include:
•
a) the factor (Rebellion principally sparked from Richard III’s brutal usurpation of the throne in 1483)
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b) evidence to support the factor (despite Edward IV having had a legitimate heir, Edward V, who, despite his young age in spite of not being able to ascend to the throne at 12 years of age , had rightful claim as successor)
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c) explanation (This caused outrage, as Edward IV's line of succession had been interrupted - some people believed Richard did not have true claim to the throne.)
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Where I've added in red, I don't know if you can notice, how significantly more factual it sounds? Examiners are lazy and are simply searching for those who hit the criteria they're marking against, and doing it in a formulaic manner such as this makes it easier for them to spot it. All in the technique
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Here's what one of your three paragraphs should look like:
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Rebellion principally sparked from Richard III’s brutal usurpation of the throne in 1483. Edward IV had a legitimate heir, Edward V, who, in spite of not being able to ascend to the throne at 12 years of age , had rightful claim as successor. This caused outrage, as Edward IV's line of succession had been interrupted - some people believed Richard did not have true claim to the throne.
•
It may seem like you're having to explain what should come as an obvious conclusion, but the examiner doesn't know that, so explain away, as that's what the question's asking you!
•
LINKING THE FACTORS. Which you've done really (Overall, it is clear that the outbursts of rebellions in 1483 was the direct result of Richard’s III poor and brutal usurpation of the throne which prevented the formation of support from the public and led to him being an unpopular leader, thus sparking continuous rebellion in 1483.) So that doesn't really need elaborating, apart from ensuring you tie up the end with something which links your three factors together
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Quick Tip: The examiner is literally looking for three factors (PEE'd) and a link. So, whilst you're historiography is lovely, you should save it for the 24 marker as you'll get marks for it there where you won't in the 12! Due to the ridiculous time constraints of this exam, you'll be wanting to save every minute you can!
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