English controlled assesment aqa

Hey guys, I'm doing AQA English language and I have a controlled assessment in less than two weeks, it's controlled assesmet 3A. It's comparing two narratives (when the wasps drowned and anil) I really want to get a band 5(A-A*) though I'm really stuck. If anyone could give me any tips or have an example of any essays on either narrative or both or even give me a website that could help or where I couldn't find support etc. to gain high marks we must pick more implicit quotes and read between the lines, can anyone help me or give me tips on how to do this? Any help or support would be greatly appreciated