Please grade my of mice and men essay about Curley's wife and comment on it?

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And what grade would you give it ranging from an A*-F

(edited 9 years ago)

You're analysis is good, I personally would give it a Band 4 (mid B) although your ideas are good and developed they're not explained in a way that's sophisticated and refined and some points of explanation lack clarity. Also you make some false accusations such as curleys wife being the only female when I believe she is one of 3/4 so instead say "curleys wife, one of the very limited female characterizations we see throughout the novella implicates the notion that, women of her calibre was the norm in their societal time" - another point; the way I worded mine sounded like it's well formulated and that's what distinguishes an A from the Rest so try to make your work sophisticated and yeah other thank that your flow is nice your points are very succinct just give it a few tweaks and you'll Deffo get an a or A*

(I love english lit it's one of my best and Favourite classes but yeah woo)

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