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Hi anyone done this could you please tell me how to get best grade possible plzzz
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Headlines and sub-headings (concise and include a device)
Sophisticated Vocabulary
Variety of punctuation
Sentences – short and long
Variety of devices – repetition, similes, metaphors, alliteration, groups of three, superlatives, rhetorical.
Paragraphs – single word paragraph, single sentence paragraph, mirror paragraph.
Facts, expert opinions
EVERY SENTENCE INCLUDES DEVICE - difficult but try..
If you don't understand any of these tips, don't hesitate to ask me. This is my strong point in english
Sophisticated Vocabulary
Variety of punctuation
Sentences – short and long
Variety of devices – repetition, similes, metaphors, alliteration, groups of three, superlatives, rhetorical.
Paragraphs – single word paragraph, single sentence paragraph, mirror paragraph.
Facts, expert opinions
EVERY SENTENCE INCLUDES DEVICE - difficult but try..
If you don't understand any of these tips, don't hesitate to ask me. This is my strong point in english
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Headlines and sub-headings (concise and include a device)
Sophisticated Vocabulary
Variety of punctuation
Sentences – short and long
Variety of devices – repetition, similes, metaphors, alliteration, groups of three, superlatives, rhetorical.
Paragraphs – single word paragraph, single sentence paragraph, mirror paragraph.
Facts, expert opinions
EVERY SENTENCE INCLUDES DEVICE - difficult but try..
If you don't understand any of these tips, don't hesitate to ask me. This is my strong point in english
Headlines and sub-headings (concise and include a device)
Sophisticated Vocabulary
Variety of punctuation
Sentences – short and long
Variety of devices – repetition, similes, metaphors, alliteration, groups of three, superlatives, rhetorical.
Paragraphs – single word paragraph, single sentence paragraph, mirror paragraph.
Facts, expert opinions
EVERY SENTENCE INCLUDES DEVICE - difficult but try..
If you don't understand any of these tips, don't hesitate to ask me. This is my strong point in english

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A few ideas you could include:
*how emotional people are to greet/say goodbye to their acquaintances.
*people running to not be late for a flight
*seeing planes take off from a big window
*tourists starting a new adventure
*description of the terminal itself like how high the ceiling is and how polished the floor is until you can see your reflection in it.
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*how emotional people are to greet/say goodbye to their acquaintances.
*people running to not be late for a flight
*seeing planes take off from a big window
*tourists starting a new adventure
*description of the terminal itself like how high the ceiling is and how polished the floor is until you can see your reflection in it.
Good luck!
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A few ideas you could include:
*how emotional people are to greet/say goodbye to their acquaintances.
*people running to not be late for a flight
*seeing planes take off from a big window
*tourists starting a new adventure
*description of the terminal itself like how high the ceiling is and how polished the floor is until you can see your reflection in it.
Good luck!
A few ideas you could include:
*how emotional people are to greet/say goodbye to their acquaintances.
*people running to not be late for a flight
*seeing planes take off from a big window
*tourists starting a new adventure
*description of the terminal itself like how high the ceiling is and how polished the floor is until you can see your reflection in it.
Good luck!

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I'm sorry but I'm not good in writing the sentences themselves, just the ideas. Ask someone in the creative writing section
I'm sorry but I'm not good in writing the sentences themselves, just the ideas. Ask someone in the creative writing section
To the op- you should use alliterations, adjectives, the five senses to describe the atmosphere etc, good vocabulary and bring your story to life.
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Do you happen to be Spanish(assuming this by your username).
Do you happen to be Spanish(assuming this by your username).
Are you German then?

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Lol actually not, but I'm doing Spanish at a level!
Are you German then?
Lol actually not, but I'm doing Spanish at a level!
Are you German then?

I find languages great in the sense that I would like to see a foreigner speak my language(Polish)
Languages are beautiful and I have seen youtube videos of people speaking like 2o languages which really is fascinating and making me want to try that out. These people must be gifted and talented at languages to be speaking so fluently.
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(Original post by ¡Muy bien!)
Lol actually not, but I'm doing Spanish at a level!
Are you German then?
Lol actually not, but I'm doing Spanish at a level!
Are you German then?


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(Original post by German123)
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I saw these videos too. I wish I were multilingual..
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I agree about Spanish being easier than German, though I still would have liked to speak German a lot!
I saw these videos too. I wish I were multilingual..
I agree about Spanish being easier than German, though I still would have liked to speak German a lot!
I saw these videos too. I wish I were multilingual..
So far I can speak only 2 languages which are English and Polish.
I really do not want to forget Polish language because languages are really important.
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A device is aparticularwordpattern,figureofspeech,combinationofwordsounds,etc.,usedinaliteraryworktoevokeadesiredeffectorarouseadesiredreactioninthereader:rhetorical devices.
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A device is aparticularwordpattern,figureofspeech,combinationofwordsounds,etc.,usedinaliteraryworktoevokeadesiredeffectorarouseadesiredreactioninthereader:rhetorical devices.
A device is aparticularwordpattern,figureofspeech,combinationofwordsounds,etc.,usedinaliteraryworktoevokeadesiredeffectorarouseadesiredreactioninthereader:rhetorical devices.
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