AS English Lit - The Kite Runner - Essay grading?

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raeisagay
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Hi guys, just wondered what grade you guys would give this essay? Want to make sure it's okay before I send it to my teacher for marking. Thanks
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Hello
It's good but the introductory paragraph is weak:
you should bهgen like this:-

The relationship between the father and his son is most important theme in novel The Kite Runner by Khaled Hosseini.Throughout the novel Amir has a complicated relationship with Baba, and as much as Amir loves Baba. Baba faced difficulties to connect with Amir.
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