AS English Lit - The Kite Runner - Essay grading?Watch
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The relationship between the father and his son is most important theme in novel The Kite Runner by Khaled Hosseini.Throughout the novel Amir has a complicated relationship with Baba, and as much as Amir loves Baba. Baba faced difficulties to connect with Amir.