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Pls can somebody who knows German check this?

Thanks very much!

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hi,
it's really good!
Just a few things:
1) write 'weil es wirklich faszinierend ist', not 'weil es ist wirklich faszinierend', the verb comes at the end of the sentence after a 'weil'
2) 'unglaublich' instead of 'überglaublich', that word doesn't exist as far as I know
3) when you use the word 'man' as in 'you', you spell it with a low key m ('wo man vieles machen kann')
4) I'm not quite sure how you mean this sentence, but if you want to say 'because I enjoy the fresh air and because we wanted to talk' you'd say 'da ich die frische Luft genieße und wir plaudern wollten'. If you mean that sentence differently, then just ignore this point :smile:

5) it's better to write 'weil meine Mutter es verlangt', using the present tense, if your mother still wants you to clear out the dishwasher sometimes (i.e. not just in the past)
6) write 'am Sonntag war ich wieder dran', it makes more sense
7) 'kaputt' is spellt with to t
8) use the singular, when you write 'weil ich keine Zeit dafür habe'

Apart from that, great! I hope I could be of some help :smile: