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I'm studying The Importance of Being Earnest for my course work, I've had my draft back and marked but I can't submit another draft, I really don't know what more I can do to get it into Band 6???? can anyone help??? Thank you
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I'm studying The Importance of Being Earnest for my course work, I've had my draft back and marked but I can't submit another draft, I really don't know what more I can do to get it into Band 6???? can anyone help??? Thank you
Sorry but for what controlled assesment is this e.g. story writing?
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Sorry but for what controlled assesment is this e.g. story writing?


dramatic genres - comedy
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dramatic genres - comedy
You have to make sure that you vary your sentence structure and length, have perfect punctualtion and be more "adventurous" with it e.g. semi-colons. Engross the reader from the start, interesting vocabulary, can have some rhetorical questions, techniques e.g. alliteration, onomatopeia ect. Can include what people are thinking. Hope this helps and good luck.
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