Hi, could you please check my prefect application letter and let me know if there is anything i should change or add. Also, i think its really short - what do you think??
Dear __
I am applying to be a prefect because I think that this is a good opportunity for me to give something back for all of the opportunities the school has given me and the help I received from previous prefects when I first came to _____.
I am a responsible, reliable and hardworking student. Furthermore, I am very punctual and have a high attendance. These qualities would make me a good prefect because I will always be there and on time for duties and after school events and can be trusted to be a good representative for ____. Additionally, I can work well in a team and with others which would help me as a prefect as I believe that part of the role is to help and work with others for example whilst on duty or helping another student.
I would be a role model to the younger years by ensuring I always have correct uniform and behave appropriately around the school. In addition, I would represent the school by helping other students around the school; especially the year seven’s that will join in September as I know that it can be daunting moving schools. I would also carry out break and lunch duties and attend after school events such as open evenings.
I hope you consider my application for the role of a prefect and look forward to hearing your decision.
Yours sincerely
______