!!!MY EXAM IS IN 3 DAYS!!! as level history tsarist russia Watch

JamesStanley
Badges: 0
Rep:
?
#1
Report Thread starter 3 years ago
#1
Hi I wondered for my as level history essay, for the 24 mark questions will me writing about 6 factors/points in brief cancel out writing about 3 factors/points in a bit more detail???

thanks
0
reply
Magnus Taylor
Badges: 15
#2
Report 3 years ago
#2
(Original post by JamesStanley)
Hi I wondered for my as level history essay, for the 24 mark questions will me writing about 6 factors/points in brief cancel out writing about 3 factors/points in a bit more detail???

thanks
I did AS History and one side of the course only did three factors in detail on the 24s ended up with 95UMS. And, on the other, I did five factors then four, and got 94 UMS so it doesn't really matter
reply
JamesStanley
Badges: 0
Rep:
?
#3
Report Thread starter 3 years ago
#3
(Original post by Magnus Taylor)
I did AS History and one side of the course only did three factors in detail on the 24s ended up with 95UMS. And, on the other, I did five factors then four, and got 94 UMS so it doesn't really matter
and were your 3 factors on one course in more detail than the 4/5 factors on the other course?
0
reply
YasminAbdi
Badges: 2
Rep:
?
#4
Report 3 years ago
#4
(Original post by Magnus Taylor)
I did AS History and one side of the course only did three factors in detail on the 24s ended up with 95UMS. And, on the other, I did five factors then four, and got 94 UMS so it doesn't really matter
what do you mean by only did three factors in detail? as in 3 for and against points, integrated?
0
reply
YasminAbdi
Badges: 2
Rep:
?
#5
Report 3 years ago
#5
(Original post by JamesStanley)
Hi I wondered for my as level history essay, for the 24 mark questions will me writing about 6 factors/points in brief cancel out writing about 3 factors/points in a bit more detail???

thanks
hey, how would you answer this type of question> How far was the success of the Bolshevik revolution of October/November 1917 due toKerensky’s weak leadership of the Provisional Government? - may 2013
0
reply
Magnus Taylor
Badges: 15
#6
Report 3 years ago
#6
(Original post by JamesStanley)
and were your 3 factors on one course in more detail than the 4/5 factors on the other course?
Yeah and conclusions and introduction more developed
reply
JamesStanley
Badges: 0
Rep:
?
#7
Report Thread starter 3 years ago
#7
(Original post by Magnus Taylor)
Yeah and conclusions and introduction more developed
ok thats good to hear because a lot of my notes have a lot of separate points which are hard to interlink so it will just be a case of writing more pints but less about them. thanks a lot :-)
0
reply
JamesStanley
Badges: 0
Rep:
?
#8
Report Thread starter 3 years ago
#8
(Original post by YasminAbdi)
hey, how would you answer this type of question> How far was the success of the Bolshevik revolution of October/November 1917 due toKerensky’s weak leadership of the Provisional Government? - may 2013
okay so your first paragraph would be about how kerenskys weak leadership was a result of the bolshevik success and then the 3 other paragraphs on other factors such as the role of lenin (his return, april thesis and his good leadership) or the weaknesses of the provisional government (one weakness being they kept russia in the war)

any other factors to this question please reply! also if im wrong or anything could be added please reply exam is in 2 days!!
0
reply
A9M4D
Badges: 1
Rep:
?
#9
Report 3 years ago
#9
(Original post by YasminAbdi)
hey, how would you answer this type of question> How far was the success of the Bolshevik revolution of October/November 1917 due toKerensky’s weak leadership of the Provisional Government? - may 2013
INTRO (dont bother - don't get marked for it)

PARA 1: Agree - Kerensky's leadership did contribute to the success of the Bolshevikii... His decision to go on the OFFENSIVE IN JUNE; his leadership in the Kornilov affair (he lost support from BOTH SIDES)

PARA 2: Disagree - Bolshevikii Strengths contrubuted to the success of the revolution... LENIN'S LEADERSHIP (propaganda "PEACE, BREAD AND LAND" "ALL POWER TO THE SOVIETS"); TROSKY'S LEADERSHIP (MILITARY REVOLUTIONARY COMMITTEE and RED GUARD)

PARA 3: Disagree - However the weaknesses of the Prov Gov also contributed to the revolution... Delay MAJOR DECISIONS; Continuation of the WAR EFFORT; DUAL POWER ARRANGEMENT; POLITICAL AMNESTY/REDUCTION OF CENSORSHIP/FREEDOMS (of speech/press).

CONCLUSION - Most important reason (i personally thing weaknesses of the Prov Gov).

GG NO RE 10/9 A* UMS 10002 ))))))))
0
reply
X

Quick Reply

Attached files
Write a reply...
Reply
new posts
Latest
My Feed

See more of what you like on
The Student Room

You can personalise what you see on TSR. Tell us a little about yourself to get started.

Personalise

University open days

  • Cardiff University
    Undergraduate Open Day Undergraduate
    Wed, 27 Mar '19
  • University of Portsmouth
    Postgraduate and Part-Time Open Evenings Postgraduate
    Wed, 27 Mar '19
  • Middlesex University London
    Postgraduate Open Evening Postgraduate
    Wed, 27 Mar '19

How old were you when you first saw porn?

I've never seen it (137)
20.57%
Before I was 12 (227)
34.08%
13 (105)
15.77%
14 (79)
11.86%
15 (43)
6.46%
16 (19)
2.85%
17 (9)
1.35%
18 (6)
0.9%
Between the ages of 19 - 24 (11)
1.65%
Over 25 (2)
0.3%
12 (28)
4.2%

Watched Threads

View All