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    Hi,
    I've got a year 10 French writing exam in two weeks and there is a small future tense section that I think has some inaccuracies. Could somebody please mark it and clear up any mistakes? Also I would love some ideas on how to improve. Thanks!

    Á l’avenir je vais essayer de manger des aliments sains. Par example, demain je vais manger célerie avec une salade et une pomme de terre en jackette avec une thon parce que c’est bon pour la santé. Aussi je vais boire plus d’eau car cest sain.
    Généralement je fais de la dance après le college mais la semain prochaine je vais nager puisque je neux peux pas nier le fait que c’est vraiment trés bon pour la santé.
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    The best thing to do is probably to give it to your teacher, they should be able to help you because the controlled assessment is just regurgitating it for that one hour.
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    (Original post by DoubleDoors)
    The best thing to do is probably to give it to your teacher, they should be able to help you because the controlled assessment is just regurgitating it for that one hour.
    I was away on Friday which was the hand in day for any work to be marked. My teacher isn't allowed to mark anything now
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    Just make sure you eat a baguette with a sprinkling of onion and French dictionary before doing it. I was also told that wearing a beanie hat, a striped black and white shirt, braces and a short moustache also helps


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    (Original post by Ser Alex Toyne)
    Just make sure you eat a baguette with a sprinkling of onion and French dictionary before doing it. I was also told that wearing a beanie hat, a striped black and white shirt, braces and a short moustache also helps


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    I wish it it were that easy...
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    'semain' is spelt 'semaine'
    nager in future tense is nagerai
    just check all you words to make sure they're in the future tense
    you could maybe say 'Á l’avenir je vais essayer de manger des aliments sains car ce qui est important, c'est de manger sain.' just to add more sentence structures.

    sorry I can't help anymore, I did this topic last year but for a speaking controlled assessment so I didn't put as much focus onto the future tense of this specific part of the topic :P
 
 
 
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