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    I have written this small piece in preparation for my Spanish writing exam tomorrow and was wondering if someone would kindly help to correct it, or suggest any improvements (I'm aiming for an A* in writing)However please ignore any missing accents as my computer wont let me add those!


    'Hay que tomar en cuenta un poco de comida basura esta bien, pero no demasiado. por esta razon comco la comida basura solo una vez al mes. Solia ir McDonalds tres veces a la semana, por eso habia convertido en grasa, ojala fuera consciente de los effectos. Si tuviera que dar mi opinion, diria que comida basura es muy malo para la salud y debe evitar comerlo.'
 
 
 
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